The other day, the lovely Laurel Garver of Laurel’s Leaves tagged me with the Lucky Seven meme. To fulfill the meme, I have to post a section of my current WIP. For this blog, I chose to post from my literary/upmarket women’s/historical fiction Dark Mercy, which I call The Platypus. The tag requires the author to post from p.77, seven lines down. But when I looked that section up, I discovered that it's a birthing scene. And since I have several blog readers who are quite young and the scene is somewhat graphic, I decided to post a section a few pages earlier leading up to the birth scene. So this is from p.70, seven lines down:
She staggered to the drapes and peeked into the streets, but
they were empty. Was that good or bad? She made her way to the stairs, grasping
the back of the couch as a contraction wrapped its iron fingers around her
spine. Her legs quivered. She moaned and grasped the silk upholstery so hard
that her nails cut into the fabric. Her fingers curled with pain and tore the
fabric into ribbons.
One by one, the painful talons slackened, but she knew that
they’d return and with more virulence. A few hours ago, she’d woken with pain
in her back. She’d tried laying on her side and then her back. But like hunger,
the pains got worse. Then the vomiting began. She called the doctor, but he
wasn’t there. He had left during in the night and hadn’t come back. His wife
warned, “Even if he gets home, I don’t think he will come—who knows where the
fighting is or if it’s safe to travel.” When she couldn’t endure the pain any
longer, she called Lianda. She knew Lianda would come.
The final requirement of the Lucky Seven is to tag another
seven writers. (I can’t wait to read their excerpts. I can’t remember who’s
already been tagged—so if you’re getting tagged twice, sorry.)
1. 1. Melissa Pearl
2. 2. Anne Riley
3. 3. AB Keuser
4. 4. Misha Gericke
5. 5. Lydia Kang
6. 6. Krispy/Alz
7. 7. Theresa Milstein
Also, as a treat I’ve also decided to post from the sequel
to Screwing Up Time on my Screwing Up Time blog. So click over if you’d like to
read that.
Good excerpt, and I do believe I've experienced pain just like that.
ReplyDeleteWow, what a powerful scene! Reminds me of childbirth and kidney stones.
ReplyDeleteThanks for tagging me!
The bit about the doctor - why he can't come - is very intriguing.
ReplyDeleteThat sounds...painful, totally made me squirm a little. Good reaction if that's what you were going for. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the tag! We'll have to find something suitable. I don't think we HAVE a page 77 yet...
Also, glad you enjoyed my WoW post. Yes, those books all have GORGEOUS covers! So excited for them all!